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I can only repeat what has already been said so eloquently. This image driven poem is fierce with battle and survival. It never loses energy.

Clean as bone. Oh. I felt every single line of this fabulous piece, Jen. Well done. I'm going to keep coming back to this!

Thank you 😊 Oooh does this mean you've posted yours now???

Hahaha! Why is this the best comment ever in the history of all evers! Yes! I finally got a chance to work on it very early this morning!!

wow... deep... i wish that mine would pack their bags

What a fantastic take on the theme, Jen 👏🏻👏🏻

What a call to arms and a triumphant end I didn’t see coming! Such brilliant imagery and language. Enjoy the clean as bone life till the next merely irksome encounter! 💪💪💪

Thanks Ju. Glad you liked it ♥️

So powerful. Absolutely love this.

#possessed

So raw and powerful! The final stanza is a poem in itself.

Oh yes!!

WOW!!! 😮 I am speechless!!

I so love your antithetical poem Jen, to be dispossessed (even the demons have departed), o my.

A wonderful allegory of survival and thriving, Jen, with some fantastic imagery! 🙏🌠👏

Jen, wowed by the idea of laying seige to you and ultimately giving up while you held strong. The honey/hive metaphor is really compelling. Trauma remains the emotional center—how it haunts/tears at us as #possession is 💥. In the end you show us that if it cannot be beaten it can be outpaced.👏👏👏

A phenomenal capture Jen