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C.H. Schwartz
@chschwartz.bsky.social

#LitHodgepodge 4 I feel I struggle with describing scene transitions from location to location, and when zi describe a location I end up happy with the small details but feel my overall presentation suffers in feeling overly list-like. What are some of y'alls tips for moving/establishing a scene?

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Kira of the Wind (Erika McCorkle)
@kiraofthewind.com

Repeating what other people said. I used to struggle with this, too, because I wanted to show EVERYTHING. The reader doesn't care. They don't want to see everything. Just go to the next scene. Or if it's within a scene, just a single sentence moving everything along with suffice.

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