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In a world where living body armour marks privilege, Kal chooses death over sexual servitude but is tasked by the rulers to help those like her. When she realises they're experimenting on her friends, she must team up with the man who betrayed her to save herself and everyone she loves. #preDV #A #F

Super interesting premise! That second sentence is clear and specific in terms of stakes! I wonder if you might squeeze in a little more detail in the first sentence? Is there a way to do a bit more world building in this first sentence?