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I am now on book #7 and I regret to inform all of you who told me that the books got worse that I actually think they're getting better. Or maybe I'm just way more interested in intergalactic politics than I am in loot boxes. 🤣

Ghostly Bree@mostlybree.kitrocha.com

I've been bopping in & out in between reading other things, but I did just finish book 3 and have downloaded book 4, for those keeping track of my DCC journey! I have a lot of chores/organizing/cleaning to do over the next week so I may make it through this book faster than the last one. We'll see!

oh, I don't think that is why they're better. LOL like, if anything, in my author group chats we're talking about how these books are proof that we can ignore the growing push to strip everything down & microexplain it, because the later books are SPRAWLING EVERYWHERE.

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ha! yes. i didn’t mean on a developmental or focus type of editing, but his individual sentences and paragraphs got much more nicely written. the first few books, he would reuse the exact same pattern in paragraphs over & over and he stopped that entirely in the final ~3 books.

that’s good!! i read with my eyes, maybe that was my mistake lol i was just so happy to find myself enjoying the writing itself on top of being curious what would happen next