AsurasHaiku

AsurasHaiku

@asurashaiku.bsky.social

High school English teacher interested in reading, writing, and translating haiku.

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the sorrow of living has the neck of a giraffe --Shinko Tokizane 生きるかなしみにキリンの首がある 時実新子 (lit. "on living sadness there is a giraffe's neck") #senryu #translation

things of this world end in this world the bus moves on --Shinko Tokizane この世のことはこの世で終わるバス走る 時実新子 #senryu #translation

a paper gun always aimed at you --Shinko Tokizane 紙鉄砲いつもおまえに向いている 時実新子 Note: What we call a "paper popper" (origami that you flick to make a loud popping sound) is lit. "paper gun" in Japanese Take 2: paper popper always pointed right at you #senryu #translation

I fall asleep a bundle of lies --Shinko Tokizane 嘘のかたまりの私が眠ります 時実新子 (Lit. "I, a lump of lies, sleep") Take 2: a mass of lies, I go to sleep #senryu #translation

Just heard about Ryu Murakami. Almost Transparent Blue, Coin Locker Babies, and In the Miso Soup blew my mind in college. Miike's adaptation of Audition led me to Love & Pop, Tokyo Decadence, Popular Hits of the Showa Era, Piercing... He left behind an amazing collection of work.

dragging down Maria of the Dawn into the same sin --Shinko Tokizane 暁のマリアを同罪に堕とす 時実新子 Note: an allusion to Mother Mary, perhaps connected to "Maria of the Dawn Gate"? #senryu #translation

they ran through her all the more-- those ten years! --Shinko Tokizane まして女の中を流れた十年よ 時実新子 #senryu #translation

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Our prompts for this month are all borrow words! Tag #PJSenryu and we’ll retweet your poems. Today’s prompt: Jungle Casual reminder that submissions are open! #writingprompts #poetryprompts #WritingCommunity

Happy to receive my contributor's copy of Manten no Hoshi vol. 8! Thank you to editor Yo Tsukinami for sending it and for publishing #Senryu Abroad.

no, no, no these tears are of separate beds, separate dreams* --Shinko Tokizane ちがうちがうちがう涙の異床異夢 時実新子 #senryu #translation *異床異夢: a play on 同床異夢 (lit. "same bed, different dreams"), an expression meaning "cohabitating but living in different worlds"; hers is lit. "different beds, different dreams"

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I have a series of senryu in the first issue of Roughhouser! Check it out and congrats to my companions! #WritingCommunity #poetry

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Issue 1 out now roughhouser.neocities.org/issue-1/

in comparison every part of me is flammable --Shinko Tokizane 見比べてわたしのぜんぶ可燃物 時実新子 Take 2: comparing us all of me is combustible #senryu #translation

the dying body being held cherry blossom pink --Shinko Tokizane 死に体を抱かれていたり桜いろ 時実新子 Note: 死に体, lit. "dying body," is a sumo term, according to the dictionary, referring to a "falling position from which it is impossible to recover"; it's also a homonym with "I want to die" #senryu #translation

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Our prompts for this month are all borrow words! Tag #PJSenryu and we’ll retweet your poems. Today’s word: Shampoo Casual reminder that submissions are open! #writingprompts #poetryprompts #WritingCommunity

your footsteps approach, stepping across my heart --Shinko Tokizane 靴音が近づき胸を踏んで過ぎ 時実新子 Take 2: footsteps approach, stepping on my breast as they pass #senryu #translation

from mother to mother from mother to mother a creaking sound --Shinko Tokizane 母から母へ母から母へ軋む音 時実新子 Or "creaking from mother to mother from mother to mother" #senryu #translation

the dead are merely silent the powerless moon shines --Shinko Tokizane 死者はただ黙す無力な月は照る 時実新子 #senryu #translation

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Our prompts for this month are all borrow words! Tag #PJSenryu and we’ll retweet your poems. Today’s word: Checkmate Casual reminder that submissions are open! #writingprompts #poetryprompts #WritingCommunity

everyone, take a good look -- seagulls are black birds --Shinko Tokizane みんなよくごらんカモメは黒い鳥 時実新子 #senryu #translation

if you stretch your neck far enough, water in the Big Dipper --Shinko Tokizane 首伸ばしきれば北斗の杓の水 時実新子 #senryu #translation