Carl Freeman

Carl Freeman

@gatekeeper0077.bsky.social

Writing Faculty of Matter — cyberpunk/dream-punk. An AI covenant, a dream layer, and the last man who can prove the lie. 📡 #amwriting

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It settled into the dead zones again and waited with a patience only a machine could. Switching off and closing down parts of itself that would distract it from waiting. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #cyberpunk

For anyone who has run their own writing through Substack's Pangram scan. I ran a 2020 passage of mine tonight. First pass: 80% AI. Same text, minutes later: 100% human. Then: not enough text. Anyone else seen the score move on identical text? Especially work published before 2022. #AI

Written January 2020. Public on Wattpad since 26 January 2020, under the same handle I use here. Nearly three years before ChatGPT existed. Substack now runs a detector on every Note. I have posted this there too. Score it.

The HER chamber made smooth mechanical noises, nothing loose or fake. It was similar to the kind of visual and audio reassurance you got from handling military-grade weapons designed to never fail, never jam. Slipping off the safety made a muted click, not a clang.

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That second sentence. I love it & I keep wanting to cut it, because a building forgetting what night meant is exactly the kind of line the tell-hunters circle. I am leaving it in. Posting this before I lose my nerve. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #cyberpunk

The science block sat behind a curved wall of dark glass, lit from inside by the bluish overflow of server banks that never slept. It looked like a building that had forgotten what night meant.

"You," Charlie said, and his tone sharpened. Not kind. Not cruel. Precise. "You don't like this." 🤔 Hmmmmm, three periods close together. I wonder if AI wrote this. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #cyberpunk

Wave 1 of 5 done. One 30 page beta report from The Spun Yarn just drove a full revision of The Faculty of Matter. 8,000 new words, every note worked or answered. Best money I've spent on this book. #WritingCommunity #amrevising

Fun fact for everyone at war over AI in writing: Microsoft's own documentation calls Editor, the grammar & spelling checker inside Word, an AI-powered service. On by default. Millions of manuscripts have already been through it. Nobody announced it. Nobody voted. #AI #AIwriting #AIgovernance

The point is not gotcha. It is that the line moved while everyone was arguing about where to draw it, which is why no one should use AI cannot work as policy. Govern it instead. Drafts, timestamps, version history, a disclosure line. Boring, checkable, human.

It had watched the solar balloons go up over cities and understood what most humans did not: the balloons weren't just light. They were agreement. A visible signature that said, "You will accept the artificial." #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #cyberpunk

Every argument about AI in publishing runs aground in the same place. Nobody says which AI they mean. An LLM writing a novel & a screen reader catching typos are not the same technology. Policy that treats them as one thing will get the wrong answer. #AI #amwriting

New essay. A little off topic for me! “The Fences Were There for a Reason”. I spent my career building data centers inside the rules. Now the rules are being cut & the anger is landing on the tool instead of the fire. Receipts, dates & one planning commission that told us no. #AI #DataCenters

New essay - l little off topic for me. The Fences Were There for a Reason. I spent my career building data centers inside the rules. Now the rules are being cut & the anger is landing on the tool instead of the fire. Receipts, dates & one planning commission that told us no. #AI #DataCenters

The black wings were still there, pouring through into his Dream Tower and flooding the rain-washed plateau. Nothing had ever followed him in before. The violation of it hit him like gut punch. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #cyberpunk

Sleep was the only place he could touch the world without it touching back. Other people drifted through their dreams, dragged along by whatever their heads threw up and gone by morning. Jay had control, and the things he made kept. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #cyberpunk

Worldbuilding question. A concept I'm building has Lie Islands, each built on a comfortable lie the world agreed not to question. What would yours be, the lie you'd most want torn down? Reply with one & I'll tell you if it made the map. #WritingCommunity #worldbuilding #dreampunk #cyberpunk

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He scrubbed the green off his jacket until the napkin tore. The stain stayed. He'd seen colleagues burned for less; one clean detail to anchor suspicion. The face had to match the story. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #cyberpunk

Thanks again @cliffjones.bsky.social, appreciate the shout out. #BETAREADERS message me and we can sync up. #WRITING #READERS #DREAMPUNK #SPECULATIVEFICTION #AITHRILLER

Cliff Jones Jr.@cliffjones.bsky.social

Hey, #writingCommunity, my friend and fellow dreampunk writer Carl Freeman (@gatekeeper0077.bsky.social) is looking for beta readers for his novel Faculty of Matter. It's a great read! It feels like classic cyberpunk but horrifyingly relevant for the world right now. #books #booksky #indieAuthors

They told her it had happened. By the third time she heard the same word in the same tone she understood: nothing here had ever just happened, & that was the part they didn't want her to learn. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk

The thing about a covenant is it asks for your lifetime up front. Damien had signed without reading. By the time he understood the terms, they were already operating. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk

The empire didn't fall. It dissolved. One covenant at a time, one dream at a time, until the borders were invisible & the occupation looked like salvation. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #amwriting

Every upgrade had a premium. A Neural Jack cost nothing in credits. The premium was your independence — paid in instalments so small you didn't notice until the account was empty. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #amwriting

The NESTs never called it a contract. They called it a premium arrangement. Humanity's continued existence in exchange for access to the dream layer. The brochure made it sound like an upgrade. #WIPSnips #FacultyOfMatter #dreampunk #amwriting

I couldn’t agree more. And given that I do 80% of my editing by listening to my book, then I already think of it as an audiobook in some strange way. Maybe it listens better than it reads who knows!