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I've spent all day struggling to write a single page of a popular science article. I bang away at a word processor; give up; start diagramming on paper. Take some notes; draft a few sentences in pen; return to the computer...and very slowly I figure out what I was trying to say in the first place.

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A few bits of wisdom which proved useful to me at times like this: I am a carpenter, not an artist. I need to have the end in mind when I begin, and I can always begin in the middle… then write the introduction last. Also: it’s OK to write crap now, forgive yourself, and fix it later.

It's a struggle, but it's gratifying once things start coming together. What I have on paper tonight is a clean expression of idea I didn't have well-formed when I began this morning. Some people think we should hand off this painstaking form of labor to LLMs and get back to doing science.

In my case, this painstaking labor in the process through which the science gets done. Science isn't measuring stuff in a lab. It's thinking deeply, extracting the heart of idea from the soup of thoughts running through my mind, molding it, and finding a way to communicate that idea to others.

100% the way the best ideas come to light and LLMs will likely never be able to do that with any sort of consistency. Probably not at all except through accident or theft of obscure but already existing work.

Isn't "just" measuring stuff in the lab. Without our grad students and postdocs generating data and experimentally testing hypotheses (ours and theirs), our desk jockey jobs would be rather unfulfilling.

I could have finished this piece in five minutes this morning by prompting an LLM. And I think my editor would take it. The rest of the article is solid. This is just the concluding frame. But had I done so, the thought would be flabby and woefully incomplete. I'd be wasting my readers' time.

There's an attitude that if you use an LLM to do a bit of grunt writing, it's OK as long as you honestly review it. "Yup! That's exactly the itinerary I would've written" or whatever. But people are missing (and I think maybe don't even know) that sometimes writing IS thinking. You have to do it.

I think the most interesting part of writing is figuring out what you’re trying to write. You sit down with an idea of what you want to write…and it’s broken and clunky and flawed and every attempt to make it flow is awful and slowly you pare it back and re analyse what you’re ACTUALLY trying to say

Yes! The writing is a key part of science and other complex thinking endeavours. It changes the brain and helps us test, clarify and refine information and ideas. The pain is the point: that's the creativity in action!

Thank you for this post. I have been a research scientist since 1977 and I've written some very complicated papers over the years. Sometimes it takes me ages to figure out what the data are telling me. It's not only painstaking, but it can get very uncomfortable while in the wilderness searching.

The process leads you in directions which grow your understanding of the topic, but also of those places where you get stuck. That’s where growth happens. Handing off to an LLM anywhere in the process limits, or eliminates, growth of thought.

When I'm struggling to start, I begin with just writing keywords, grouping those, and getting some topical sentences from that. And I go for a walk or take a shower and let my spatial-navigation mind surface some ideas. Maybe have a protein snack.

Writing isn't thinking but it does make you think. Telling someone else has a similar effect. As a computer programmer, I have often solved a difficult problem by describing it to a co-worker. The co-worker rarely contributes but putting the problem into words forces a certain kind of thinking.