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Roran "Madigan Cross" Thorne
Roran "Madigan Cross" Thorne
@blackdogged.com
Freelance line/copy editor | Manuscript evals and sensitivity reads | ex-Tapas | SFF, dark fantasy, horror, LITRPG, et al. | gremlin second coming of David Bowie (alleged) | hobby collector of hobbies
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Free webinar from The Authors Guild: Estate Planning for #Writers: Protecting Your Creative Legacy π Tuesday, October 27, 2026 β° 12 p.m. ET / 9 a.m. PT Register here: authorsguild.org/event/estate... #amwriting #writingcommunity #writing #indieauthor #indieauthors
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What should you do with a ridiculously long URL in text to make it easier for readers? @chicagomanual.bsky.social has some suggestions in this Shop Talk update.
I, alas, have a doctor's appointment set for the same time and can't participate But I'm looking forward to catching up and celebrating how well everyone did
Todayβs #StetSprint starts in 30 minutes at 2 p.m. ET! Get ready for a focused hour of work. How to #StetSprint 1οΈβ£ Share your goal with us (ex. βCopyedit 6 pages of MSβ). 2οΈβ£ Focus on work for 1 hour: No phones, no social media, just working. 3οΈβ£ In 1 hour, check back in here and tell us how you did!
I realized I had the perfect thing to test @edda.ink: an obscenely complicated family tree. Results were mixed. 1. Once you put a character into the tree and connect them, you can't edit this. I screwed up one branch in particular and had to delete the affected character to fix it.
I realized I had the perfect thing to test @edda.ink: an obscenely complicated family tree. Results were mixed. 1. Once you put a character into the tree and connect them, you can't edit this. I screwed up one branch in particular and had to delete the affected character to fix it.
I realized I had the perfect thing to test @edda.ink: an obscenely complicated family tree. Results were mixed. 1. Once you put a character into the tree and connect them, you can't edit this. I screwed up one branch in particular and had to delete the affected character to fix it.
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Join #StetChat's upcoming chats on Bluesky: π November 4, 2026: Expanding Your Offerings π November 18, 2026: Gifts for Editors That Donβt Suck π December 2, 2026: Holiday Scheduling π December 16, 2026: Wrapping Up 2026 π January 6, 2027: 2027 Goals #amediting #edibuddies #editorsky
1. It's probably cheating if I claim the whole series, right? I almost want to say Grace for the best meet cute disaster of all time ("SO SORRY, ma'am") but the Shane-specific fridge horror checks all the boxes, so I'll run with @tkingfisher.com's Paladin's Faith if I can only pick one for now
3. The Rage of Dragons by @evanwinter.bsky.social (book 3 for this trilogy can't come soon enough for me). I needed berserkers and boy did this deliver.
1. It's probably cheating if I claim the whole series, right? I almost want to say Grace for the best meet cute disaster of all time ("SO SORRY, ma'am") but the Shane-specific fridge horror checks all the boxes, so I'll run with @tkingfisher.com's Paladin's Faith if I can only pick one for now
I'm still poking around at things (and there's a lot to see), but I don't think I've seen anyone do this quite as efficiently or directly At least not without a subscription or AI features being included
Writing a series? You should not rebuild the world for every book. Edda groups your books into a series and shares the worldbuilding across them, so book two starts where book one left off. #WritingCommunity #amwriting #BookSeries #Worldbuilding #WritersLife #IndieAuthor
This is a big one when it comes to navigating what's "too much" world building in a lot of SFF genres, especially ones like epic fantasy. 1. I think "too much" is unhelpfuly broad. "Too much" leads to "How can it be too much if it's important?" That question creates friction.
Q: Handling backstory when the story has a TON of worldbuilding unfamiliar to readers? A: What's the minimum amount of info that the reader needs to understand the story we're telling up to this point? What's adding necessary context vs. what are you putting in because it sounds cool?
This is a big one when it comes to navigating what's "too much" world building in a lot of SFF genres, especially ones like epic fantasy. 1. I think "too much" is unhelpfuly broad. "Too much" leads to "How can it be too much if it's important?" That question creates friction.
Q: Handling backstory when the story has a TON of worldbuilding unfamiliar to readers? A: What's the minimum amount of info that the reader needs to understand the story we're telling up to this point? What's adding necessary context vs. what are you putting in because it sounds cool?
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Replying to @carolinavonkampen.com
Include Meaningful Action Your protagonist should be doing a meaningful actionβsomething they're doing to reach their goal. Show that they have agency in the story.* *This is a Western storytelling ideaβCraft in the Real World talks about how this is not always true in non-Western storytelling:
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Make a promise to the reader. Context: Who is the story about and where does its take place? These basic questions need to be answered in the first chapter for readers to be oriented. Conflict: (I missed what she said on this one lol sorry) Care: What does your character want and why?
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Start with a hook: Your first sentence should get readers to ask questions! "I woke up and stretched my arms"βboring start because it's not unusual. Don't start with action for the sake of actionβif you start in action, it needs to be tied to the overall story. Don't start with infodumps!
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It's true! We'll be sharing more details about this virtual conference that's "A little shorter, but still immensely useful" within the next couple weeks!
Exciting news: The En Dash Conference by @edsguild.bsky.social and @editorsteaclub.bsky.social will be January 22β23, 2027. More info coming soon from both editorsteaclub.org and edsguild.org! #amediting #edibuddies #editorsky #freelanceeditor
GOOD NEWS for fans of Tapas original author GivemethatBread! EVERY chapter that was locked behind the paywall has been unlocked for WUF access. #bl #TapasUpdate @givemethatbread.bsky.social (she has link ink bio)
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Comm for @hinnhawkeye.bsky.social I canβt stop looking at this piece! The muted tones are quite unusual for me, but they look so pleasing and harmonious in this work!π #ych #commission
Okay. The very best I can tell, this is how this was formed. There's still something about the first letter that seems off, and I'm completely guessing at the starting point. I can't say this clarified anything for me at all. But maybe someone else can make sense of this?
Weird request. So, I was scrolling on eBay and my eye caught on an item lot of 27 vintage rings. In particular, I focused on a blurred ring in the background. The ring pictured below. Sometimes, as an author, you need to know the story. I kind of thought the year read 1976, the year I was born.
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Free educational video alert! Catch up with @radicalcopyeditor.bsky.social Alex Kapitan's recent "Editorial Tools to Counter Sexism and Transphobia" presentation. Free for everyone to watch through 11/14, after which it will be a member-only video. www.edsguild.org/editorial-to...
I've done a quick skim and there's two pretty big things here: - Zero AI inside. - Pay once, own for life. No subscription. I still need to poke around a little more, but as an anti-AI editor who specializes in dark/epic fantasy actively looking to improve my flow? This could be game changing.
Working with a co-writer, an editor or an illustrator? Edda exports character sheets, a world bible and a story outline, not just the manuscript. #WritingCommunity #amwriting #fantasywriting #Worldbuilding #WritersLife #IndieAuthor
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