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Your next sale won't be a 1000-seat order from Google. But is your homepage written as if this is the target? Formal, obtuse, corporate-speak, pretending to be a mature, stable company. You’re alienating your actual best customers.

longform.asmartbear.comYou’re a little company, now act like oneYou’re afraid that looking like being a small company means you’ll lose sales. It’s actually the opposite -- you’re alienating your best customers.

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It always amuses me when solopreneurs use "we" instead of "I". And when one person is referred to as a team. Don't they know that faceless big business, that only values you for how much money you can spend, is less appealing than the human touch?

This is capitalism gone wrong, where success MUST mean billion-dollar revenues and ownership of your own company diluted by a bunch of investors.

I agree to an extent. If I'm looking to do something like remodeling a portion of my home or installing new solar, etc. -AND- The business only has a gmail, hotmail or aol email contact or no website for info, it might be wiser to look elsewhere.

to be fair, I DID get a 1000+ unit for a big tech company. But I AM still a small business, (I'm happily retired and it's my hobby so i dont want to grow it)

In my hometown way back in the day, a local bank wanted, and built, branches that "didn't look like banks." They were widely reviled by the architectural community. But a bank should look like a bank: like, as an article in the local paper said, "a solid financial institution."

I just went out of my way to buy an appliance from a local store instead of a big box. Their website is nothing fancy, but it gives a history of the company (since 1962), their actual values and community ties, and their prices are just as good as the big boys. Bonus: very helpful phone service.

I don't have to, because 100% of our target market already knows our brand. (And we have 200,000 paying customers.) But if you really want that, AI can easily do that without even searching the web. 😄

And how do you know that? We have done extensive brand studies, with aided and unaided awareness, through a 3rd party so we're not biased. Internally we have reams of brand docs from high level descriptions to details on voice and design. "I won't define it" is a funny way to summarize that. 😄

I think I stumbled upon this post a long time ago, and it inspired some, "Our websites don't suck." mailers that were highly effective. Thank you, 18 years too late I guess? haha

It was very funny at the tiny biotech company I used to work for. There was no product, there were no deliverables. There were five employees and three were consultants. Yet. the corpo speak persisted

So true. I've been telling my clients that for the last 15 years. One small business increased booking calls by 20% simply by replace "contact us" with "Call John" on their website. People like dealing with small businesses

I’m so used to it being labelled “Contacts” or “Contact Us” that “Call John” almost makes me laugh because it sounds weirdly ominous.

IMHO, most stock photos involving people are cringy. In microseconds, customers will know that those people don't work in your office. If you don't have a staff big enough to get a decent photo, use something else.

Kind of like AI photos. If you cared enough only to type a few words into a prompt, why do I think you’re going to care more about other things? You did the whole Jurassic Park thing and want me to trust your dinosaur park.

Agree. On LinkedIn, I start off my weekly articles with "this wasn't written with AI", which is my way of saying that I appreciate the time people would take reading it, and that I put more than that (even with its imperfections, like the last sentence).