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Sentence fragments must be earned by good writing elsewhere in the text. (I assume the rest of the text is poorly written also.)

Isn't that just the plot of The Matrix?

they should give content creators hazard pay for needing to consume this shit

not sure if this is too obvious to state but isn't this a hallmark of AI writing

After seeing this I kind of think Mr. Beast actually wrote it.

Reading that one bit ALONE made me feel out of breath, there's a whole book's worth of this???? 💀

Holy shit this reeks of AI.

It’s almost up there with “there is nothing more reviled than the Orc”

If you don't read it in a gravelly undertone it doesn't work

The ☝️

It's not just one, it's two

oh so thats why we call it beast mode

It's somehow two in a row that are bridged by a third.

there is no way that whoever (or whatever) wrote this has any love for books

chatbot levels of literary talent

The one... is starting to become The One 😱😱😱😱

Hopefully you're getting paid to read this dreck lol

Listening to the Episode I couldn’t help but notice that The One was something I saw in at least one other AI-generated script, and as a phrase seems to come up relatively often when people start getting AI Psychosis.

the slop machines use "not [x]. not [y]. [z]." more in my opinion

I had to rewind the podcast because I couldn't believe Jimmy Beast put himself in this Trash Mad Libs. There's lazy and then there's...this.

I know that the things aren't alive, let alone conscious, but I STILL think that qualifies as abuse!

I, the reader, mistake all things for other things before punctually realizing they are not that thing!

Oooof, this reeks of AI. He had an LLM write his dumb book and that's about the same level of thought he put into his gameshow design.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=85B_... He turned into an Elton John song?? Dastardly

land shark

My eye twitched when I read that, and I read the image before the caption

This is elder abuse. James Patterson doesn’t know what his name’s being used to launder.

written by AI*

It's so funny that AI slop is so pervasive that AI models can't train themselves out of these tells. Once you see it you see it everywhere.

So the ghostwriter was ChatGPT. How surprising.

I watched a video going over it before this went live and it really feels like the ghost writer went "I don't fucking know" and phoned it in, and frankly I sympathize.

1. What is this plot stuff, The Marrix but worse? 2. The title sucks because I cant research "The Most Dangerous Game" (singular), which was assigned reading for me in 9th grade.

Literary talent on the level of Ben Shapiro (derogatory).

I’ve read Onision’s books and I’m still shocked by how bad it is

The short, punchy sentence fragments are very amateur screenplay-coded, which isn’t helped by everything being in present tense.

Whomever was ghostwriting this book for the two of them either has brain worms or got 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 bad notes

This is how AI writes all the time, which is fine for bullet points in a work email or something but a book? That said it’s PERFECT for a Mr Beast book

The contestants gained self realisation as they munched down on a MR BEAST bar, becoming aware of the simulacrums that made up the task at hand

The prose really works if you imagine the narrator is Mojo Jojo

This entire episode convinced me the Novel and Authors were a mistake.

This single fact about the book has made me so angry at it on so many levels.

a *louder* bomb??

This reads like a parody