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This is *wildly* illegal and *incredibly* immoral. The paper claims that by *simply reading an article*, you agree that you can never, ever sue them for virtually *any reason*, *and* that you have consented to effectively *unlimited* surveillance and commercial exploitation of your private data.
A new survey of 1,000 American adults found that the strongest supporters of transgender sports bans are not the people who admire women most: they are the people who hold the most hostile views about women.
www.helenwebberley.com/news/transge...
Why would I ever spend my precious, exhaustible time reading something you couldn’t be bothered to write when there’s already more books in the world than I’ll ever have time to read?
He said he didn't just wake up one day and stop loving me. It started with boredom, then annoyance, and finally #doubt. It took years, apparently. I had no idea; he never told me he was drifting away.
I wonder if I would've ever learned he'd changed if I hadn't found her earring in my bed.
#vss365
AI people think the only value in anything is the final output (result, picture, song, story, etc) when the real value is always in the input (ideas, effort, thought, work).
I hate how many of my targeted ads on Instagram are borderline predatory "marketing hacks for authors"... The same people spreading the lie that you need hundreds of thousands of followers to build a writing career then try to sell you "one quick trick" to make it happen 😡
I'm not denying marketing is important or can be an asset for an author. But building marketing skill is like building (most) authentic followings: it takes time and practice and is rarely achieved with a magical Canva template for your carousels
It had to happen, and I'm amazed I haven't seen something like this before: a scam exploitiing the Anthropic copyright settlement.
See the lines at the end, under "Jessa's" signature? "Source" is the Library of Congress (I clicked the link). Confirms that scammers are harvesting contact info there
Watching my bully go after the new kid ignited something in me. I couldn't let him suffer like I did. I was steeling myself to confront the brute, channeling hatred into courage, when the most #unexpected thing happened: he vanished! The lunchroom took a collective gasp. Was this my doing?
#vss365
My daughter earned her reputation for #bravery. While other children conquered playgrounds, she was trained to lead an army. Though I love her courage, I hate the circumstances that made it shine. I would've gladly traded all her fame and military skill for her to have a life of peace.
#vss365
This is also just empirically untrue as a matter of reading consumption: women do, in fact, read books by men. It’s men who do not read books by women. I suspect the reason is not “biological.”
There's a guy in my replies who says he doens't read women because they write well about emotional conflicts and unrequited love and that's not what he wants. He reads sci fi he says. Can you imagine reading sci-fi and not reading Octavia Butler? Or Ursula K Le Guin? Or NK Jemisin?
There's a guy in my replies who says he doens't read women because they write well about emotional conflicts and unrequited love and that's not what he wants. He reads sci fi he says. Can you imagine reading sci-fi and not reading Octavia Butler? Or Ursula K Le Guin? Or NK Jemisin?
I finally encountered the infamous "I don't read anything published after 2022 because of AI" opinion in the wild, and it's such an astoundingly terrible "solution"...
It's basically "I don't like how LLMs are killing the book industry so I'm going to kill it FIRST."
In light of some magazines pulling scummy things on creators lately, I’m doing a little thread on short story rights. I don't want anybody getting taken advantage of.
Also, if you're new, this stuff can be confusing!
This reminds me of my friend's teen daughter, who only reads stories she "co-writes" with ChatGPT because she doesn't like that real books sometimes go a different direction from what she wants. She said now she can give everything perfect characters, perfect endings, and everything to her taste...
It's making meaning between the author and the reader, creating space for thought and conversation, and so much more that can't be replaced with one human sitting alone with an LLM chat window
This reminds me of my friend's teen daughter, who only reads stories she "co-writes" with ChatGPT because she doesn't like that real books sometimes go a different direction from what she wants. She said now she can give everything perfect characters, perfect endings, and everything to her taste...
My arguments about the theft of creative work have not persuaded her yet. But I hope someday she realizes that encountering things different than what she would have done is a feature, not a bug
Ahahaha there was a scene like this in an early draft of WICKHILLS - Ferec the spy goes through the pockets in a quick, desultory fashion (there's nothing) and Velasco is like "But 😢 there's supposed to be 😢" (because he's obsessed with a fictional Sherlockian-style detective)
One of my least favorite tropes in a noir/detective/mystery story is when the hero makes progress on the mystery *only* by rifling the pockets of the defeated goons sent to warn him off. It implies the hero is so bad at their job that the villain would have been better off literally doing nothing.
Creating an "AI" avatar of your dead loved one w/o their input or consent, & saying that it counts "the same" as the dead loved one— ESPECIALLY as evidence in a MURDER TRIAL— is both a massive misunderstanding of what "AI" is & how it works, & a hugely dehumanizing insult to said dearly departed.
A man convicted of manslaughter in Arizona will be resentenced because an AI-generated video of his victim speaking from beyond the grave was ruled to have carried “undue emotional weight” as an impact statement.
@mjgault.bsky.social story: www.404media.co/her-ai-gener...
There are some news articles going around about sexual violence reporting rates at different universities.
Let’s talk about why some schools have higher reporting rates than others:
Since I did a previous thread about my common criticisms of the 7 sets of the first 10 pages of novels I read for an upcoming writing workshop, here are some of the things that made me write compliments in the margins. Here are the roses to my previous thread's thorns:
I'm attending a writing workshop in two days for which I had to read the first 10 pages of 7 other authors' manuscripts in advance to provide feedback during the session. Here are some of my most common suggestions for improvement in those opening pages:
Several books showcased important character development even in the first 10 pages. I was impressed with these, and I felt it made me better understand why the story needed to start where it did. In other words, what's different about the protagonist before and after this specific thing?
Some manuscripts had great interiority. Where authors successfully balanced dialogue and infused descriptions with what's not said aloud but from the protagonist's perspective, I learned more about the world and the characters at the same time. It made the whole story feel more real and immersive.
Since I did a previous thread about my common criticisms of the 7 sets of the first 10 pages of novels I read for an upcoming writing workshop, here are some of the things that made me write compliments in the margins. Here are the roses to my previous thread's thorns:
I'm attending a writing workshop in two days for which I had to read the first 10 pages of 7 other authors' manuscripts in advance to provide feedback during the session. Here are some of my most common suggestions for improvement in those opening pages:
Many writers did a great job of planting curiosity seeds for me (a term I learned from the TSNOTYAW podcast, which I highly recommend). The best is when I was curious early on to learn more about the protagonist and the world, especially since the manuscripts were speculative fiction.
I love beautiful but concise worldbuilding. In these manuscripts, there were descriptions of spaceships, urban centers, forest groves, and historical small towns that skillfully weaved story elements and setting information together. These really hit that sweet spot for me as a reader.
Since I did a previous thread about my common criticisms of the 7 sets of the first 10 pages of novels I read for an upcoming writing workshop, here are some of the things that made me write compliments in the margins. Here are the roses to my previous thread's thorns:
I'm attending a writing workshop in two days for which I had to read the first 10 pages of 7 other authors' manuscripts in advance to provide feedback during the session. Here are some of my most common suggestions for improvement in those opening pages:
I love a well-done voicey narrator, especially in the first person. Several manuscripts did this very well, and I could easily understand why first person POV was the best choice for their book.
On a related note, there were several passages of dialogue that were so delightful to read. The dialogue itself wasn't too on the nose (something I find challenging personally), the section had the perfect balance of talking and action beats, and every character speaking had a distinct voice.
Yes every woman has been harassed, many assaulted. But every woman has also experienced invisible loss from moments she avoided harassment. She felt a space becoming unsafe, so she left, while men stayed on. And in leaving, she lost: opportunities, experiences, learning, promotions, even simply fun.
I'm attending a writing workshop in two days for which I had to read the first 10 pages of 7 other authors' manuscripts in advance to provide feedback during the session. Here are some of my most common suggestions for improvement in those opening pages:
Do not drop international affairs bombshells that make no sense in today's context without at least some hint that the world has changed in a way that makes sense. (E.g., a story where Kiribati becomes the sole backup location for all Earth's most important data... why??)
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I'm attending a writing workshop in two days for which I had to read the first 10 pages of 7 other authors' manuscripts in advance to provide feedback during the session. Here are some of my most common suggestions for improvement in those opening pages:
Do not drop international affairs bombshells that make no sense in today's context without at least some hint that the world has changed in a way that makes sense. (E.g., a story where Kiribati becomes the sole backup location for all Earth's most important data... why??)
Please do not make characters repeat things they both already know to each other - it comes across as an obvious exposition for the reader's benefit and takes me right out of the story.
I'm attending a writing workshop in two days for which I had to read the first 10 pages of 7 other authors' manuscripts in advance to provide feedback during the session. Here are some of my most common suggestions for improvement in those opening pages:
Don't use gratuitous racist or exclusionary language. When one protagonist kept referring to another character as "the Chinaman" (even in his head, even after meeting him, and even after staying in his house) I thought, "well I'm clearly not the audience for this book."
There's a legitimate debate to be had about historical accuracy and when offensive language might be permissible in fiction (and by whom). But for me (+ many other readers of color), I'm not looking for my fiction to be full of slurs and stereotypes I'm already tired of seeing in real life.
I'm attending a writing workshop in two days for which I had to read the first 10 pages of 7 other authors' manuscripts in advance to provide feedback during the session. Here are some of my most common suggestions for improvement in those opening pages:
Please do not make me guess who the main character or protagonist is. If you introduce too many characters, jump around inside too many heads, or have a first-person or second-person narrator with no description, then I as a reader will get confused. I want to know who to root for in the story!
Please do not make the only women you introduce in your first 10 pages caricatures of "hot" or "unhot" only. Multiple of these manuscripts mentioned women only in passing and only in terms of whether the male protagonist wanted to sleep with them.
The global resistance movement against longevity recruits Hanna Kim when a forced blood donation leaves her sister in a preventable coma. Hanna must defy her powerful mother and reject everything she was taught to discover the truth and save those she loves.
#DVpit#A#SF#SFF#OWN#Asian#POC#WOC
When 150yo grandma gets in an accident, Hanna & sis are forced to donate too much blood to save her. With sis in a coma & everything she knew about longevity shattered, Hanna chooses to reject the system her mom helped build & join the global resistance.
#DVpit#A#SF#SFF#OWN#Asian#POC#WOC
Putting your work out in the world can be one of the scariest things you'll do as an author, but it's pitch events like #DVPit and #PitchDis that make that first step so much easier and more inviting. I encourage people to look at pitches that worked, at your own, and take it as a chance to learn.